Have you ever had anyone ask you, “I hear you’re a writer.
What’s your story about?” Usually, when this happens, I curl up in a ball of
embarrassed fright and confusion, trying to figure out how to condense two
hundred pages of manuscript into a manageable soundbite. Recently, however, I
benefited from the advice of Jordan Smith, a filmmaker and friend
from Holy Worlds Christian writing forums. With his help, I’ve been able to
write a (decent) 1-sentence hook for my story—in short, a logline.
How is this supposed to help you? Can you get logline advice
from Jordan, too? Well, you’re in luck: Jordan just published a book titled Finding the Core of Your Story: The Quick and Easy Guide to Writing a Logline. Here’s the description from the
product page on Smashwords:
What's a logline? It's a very short description of the core of your story. It gets to the heart of what your story actually is and conveys that information in as little space as possible. Ultimately, it’s a tool you use to get busy people interested in your story.Not only that, it’s a handy tool for keeping your story on track. If you don’t know what your story is about in a single sentence, you run the risk of meandering your story into places where it doesn’t belong.Filmmaker Jordan Smith has earned a reputation as a logline guru. Now he’s written this fast-and-easy book to share his logline know-how with you. Inside, you’ll find:- The Quick-Start Logline Chapter to get you going right away- The four fundamental logline rules- Useful chapters on nitty-gritty logline details- More examples than you can shake a stick at- And more!You don’t have to be a filmmaker to use a logline. You just need a story that you want to tell. Whether you write novels, movies, or even operas, this book is for you. Every storyteller should be able to say in one sentence what his story is about. This book will help you learn to do just that.
I
read this book—finished it in one sitting—and I definitely agree with the
description above: Jordan’s humor and easygoing voice, along with the short and
to-the-point chapters and practice exercises in each chapter, makes this book a
valuable tool for any writer or screenwriter. Also, as a novelist, I appreciate
the insight into writing from the screenwriting angle—Jordan presented his
material in ways I wouldn’t ordinarily think of. Plus, it's affordable even for impoverished writers like me.
If
any of this has piqued your interest, I encourage you to head over to
Smashwords and buy Jordan’s book, Finding the Core of Your Story, here.
But
wait. Remember the title of this post? I said there would be a review…and a
giveaway. That’s right, three of you will be getting a copy of Jordan’s book,
for free! So what do you have to do to get it?
Simple:
comment below with a guess at how long my story’s logline is (a logline is one
sentence, remember). The three people to get closest to the answer get a free
copy of Jordan’s book. Be sure to leave your email address in the comment, so I
can contact you with the code for your prize!
Enjoy
guessing, and everyone, be sure to read Finding the Core of Your Story here.
Update: The giveaway is now closed. Thanks for participating!
Update: The giveaway is now closed. Thanks for participating!
I'm going to guess....say fifteen words?
ReplyDeletespyg93(at)yahoo(dot)com
Thanks for the guess, Rosie! We'll have to see once all the votes are in :)
DeleteTwenty-five words! :) Good, solid number. But anyhoo, have you ever read Save the Cat, by Blake Snider? It's really screen-writing help, but if you can get past the secular stuff, it can help a lot with novels, too. And he's got a bunch of good stuff on loglines.
ReplyDeleteNot a bad guess at all, Charli! But we'll have to see when the votes are in :) What's your email?
DeleteI've heard of that book, but haven't read it (yet). It does sound really great. I love taking tips from other disciplines and using it to help improve my novel. There's a lot to learn from others! Thanks for the suggestion!
Oops, sorry, forgot. It's craeswan@gmail.com :)
DeleteI hope I'm doing this right... My guess for your one sentence story logline is... 12 words long? :D My email address is ryanheart89@comcast.net
ReplyDeleteSounds like a really good book! I'm going to for sure take a look at it.
I hope all has been well for you, my friend. :-)
In His Grace~
Thanks for the guess, Ryan! We shall have to wait and see the result :)
DeleteDefinitely do take a look at it! I enjoyed it.
Thanks for the concern! Life's been good, if busy! Hope you've been well, too :)
Fourteen words!
ReplyDeleteInteresting guess :) . I wonder if there's any psychological connection between guess length and personality/writing habits? (Yeah, random thought, I know!)
DeleteOh, not really. It's just that I've heard that your one-sentence summary should be around fifteen words (good luck getting it there, though). So it was a scientifically random guess based on what I've been TOLD. Horrors!
DeleteYeah, I've heard that 15-word idea before, too. I think 18 words is definitely the closest I'll *ever* get to that, though!
DeleteWell, I'm not going to guess the length of the logline because, well… I'm the author of the book. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sienna, for the wonderful review!
(You could guess anyway, though :D ) Anyway, you're definitely welcome. I'm glad to review it, since it really was valuable to me, and I think it would be valuable to others as well. So I should be thanking you for writing it!
DeleteVery cool idea, Sienna! My guess...is...20 words. GodsPianist20[at]gmail[dot]com.
ReplyDeleteGood guess. Nice round number. I'll let you know!
DeleteI'm going to say thirteen. That was the day this month of my daughter's birthday and I'm going to say it's just about right.
ReplyDeleteOh, my birthday is also on the 13th! Only not until August. Anyway, I love that number. It definitely seems like a good one :) . I'll let you know when the votes are in!
DeleteIf you write anything like how I write (which is definitely very long), I'd have to guess a higher number. So... 28. :)
ReplyDeleteMy email is silverkeyofpoetry[at]gmail[dot]com.
God bless! Kiri Liz
Your reasoning there is quite valid. It can be pretty hard to pack your whole story into a few measly words, right? I'll let you know when all the votes are in! :)
Delete*stumbled upon this blog while looking for more Jordan giveaways*
ReplyDeleteI'm going to guess... 21. (My email is mboomc[at]gmail[dot]com.)
Great blog, Sienna! :D
Thanks, Mark! 21...good guess :) . I'll let you know!
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